Saturday, July 2, 2016

Wheke

Wheke has green coloured skin. He has a very long nose and long hair. He is an octopus. He kidnaps people, cries and he's fast. He's a stealer, evil, powerful and lonely. He is a joker, sometimes scary, bad and silly.
by Ezra

7 comments:

  1. Wheke sounds really scary, Ezra! I like all the interesting words you used to describe him. Can you draw a picture of Wheke for me? Dad.

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  2. Wow he sounds scary but also crazy and cool!!!! You're such a creative wee writer Ez, You're doing so well!! Keep up the great work. Love you heaps cute wee guy xxx.

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  3. Wheke sounds like the kind of pet I would like to have, Ez. I am loving reading your writing. I think you are one talented author. Aunty Andi xx

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  4. That's so kind Andi and Nic. I think I am going to cry.

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  5. Oh my goodness Ezra, this story made me really scared.

    -Luca rm12

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  6. Wow nice piece of writing Ezra i love it

    -Rivin Rm12

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  7. Wow i like your descriptive writing did you make him up or is he already made ?
    -Rivin Rm 12

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