Changes
We had to go
outside to see the changes in our school.
The leaves were falling down like a tornado. When we got to the pool, it looked green like
a frog. The steps on the hall were
yellow, and the hall had changed as well, a new sign. I felt weird because the roof was changed
too, I think they are solar panels.
by Ezra
Excellent writing, Ezra! There have been a lot of changes around the school lately. I really love how you described the leaves falling like a tornado and the colour of the pool like a frog!
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Love, Dad.
Wow, Ezra. With such colourful, descriptive language I could easily picture these changes. Fabulous writing!! Aunty Andi.
ReplyDeleteThanks for such nice comments. Ezra
ReplyDeleteWow Ez, amazing writing. I love how you've described all the changes at your school. Such a great writer. Lots of love, Aunty Nic and Uncle Pete xxxx
ReplyDeleteWow Ez, amazing writing. I love the way you've described the changes! You're an amazing writer. Love you heaps - Aunty Nic and Uncle Pete xxxx
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